How I Write: A writer-in-progress

There has been a fantastic writers meme going around where writers let us inside their heads, letting us know how they view their writing process. So far, it’s been great for me; it’s always nice to know how another writer gets through each day, as much of the time I am comforted by their processes, realising we all work in different ways. There is no absolute, correct, hard and fast rule to writing, which is a thought I’m comforted by.

I read Beanie Queen and Contemporary Romance Author Lily Malone‘s 2 weeks ago, then followed her link to Kylie Kaden‘s last week, and somehow between then and now, Lily asked me if I’d pick up the baton – despite the fact I’m not even published yet, which I have to say, made me pretty chuffed. Hence my title: Writer-In-Progress. Continue reading “How I Write: A writer-in-progress”


Introduction to Naughty Ninjas: Man flesh, a descriptive playground.

I was introduced to “Naught Ninjas” by my dear author friend Lily Malone, who is one sixth of the Naught Ninja collaboration. You are probably wondering what this all is, just like I was. Ninja Love

Here is an intro from their site [link]:

“We decided to see what would happen if all six author brains pulled together in a tandem effort, like a team of eager but easily distracted huskies tied to a giant, mutant sled. This site is our sled. Our ninja sled. Who knew ninjas liked to sled and own huskies, right? Well, we do.”

Continue reading “Introduction to Naughty Ninjas: Man flesh, a descriptive playground.”

Author Interview with Lily Malone – Part 2: “Fairway to Heaven”

I’ve been catching up with Lily Malone, Australian Author of Contemporary Romance. You can see Part 1 of our chat here, in which we discussed breaking into the market, self-publishing and much more.

Today we are talking about Lily’s upcoming novel “Fairway to Heaven” which will be released January 8th 2014 (so close! so excited!)

Welcome back Lily!

Thanks Ali!

With the release of “Fairway to Heaven” fast approaching (January 8th 2014) how do you feel? Is the pressure mounting or are you calm knowing everything is ready to go?

I have lots of blogs to write and organise, and a blog hop to promote but not organise thanks to Rhyll Biest who is coordinating it for me. Check it out here: Beist Books – Bunker play and bog hop giveaway! There are still slots in it – if any writers are interested in coming along? You too Ali!

(Sounds like fun – I’m off to check it out straight after this chat!)

I have the story finished and polished as much as I can polish. I have the cover. I have also organised a few reviews and ARCs (Advance Review Copies) with book bloggers. Now it’s about letting people know it’s coming soon – and of course – I still have to actually make the e-pub file and get it loaded. That will be a bit closer to the release date though.

Let’s get to know “Fairway to Heaven”:NewFinalFair#2

It’s golf. But not as you know it.

When Jennifer Gates drives to Sea Breeze Golf Club to kick off date-night with her boyfriend, the last thing she expects is to find Golf-Pro Jack giving one of his lady students a private—and very personal—lesson in bunker-play.

Lucky for Jenn, her best friend gives her the keys to the Culhane family’s beach shack on the shores of Western Australia’s Geographe Bay. Jenn hopes a weekend on the coast with her young son will give her the space she needs to rebuild her confidence after Jack’s betrayal.

But she’s not the only person seeking sanctuary by the sea. Brayden Culhane is there too, and Jenn can’t look at Brayden without remembering the tequila-flavoured kiss they shared on the shack steps years ago.

As long-buried feelings are rekindled, and a friendship is renewed, Jenn knows it is more than lazy summer days bringing her mojo back. Romantic sunsets, ice-cold beers and the odd round of golf can only go so far, because this time, trusting Brayden with her heart won’t be enough. Jenn has to learn to trust her body, too.

Ooooh I’m so excited for this release! Do you have a favourite line from “Fairway to Heaven”?

I have lots – but I’ll tell you this one because it’s the last line I added to the book. (The line about Thor).

“Brayden steps lightly off the bottom step. He’s wearing a blue-checked shirt with sleeves rolled to the elbow – unbuttoned – over a white t-shirt with a faded yellow Corona logo. Charcoal-grey shorts finish just above his knees.

“I’ve forgotten how overwhelming he is. I’m tall, but there’s so much of him to go round. It’s a bit like watching Thor, but without the hammer.”

 If I say the word “cringe” do you instantly think of moments where while writing you felt sorry for the characters and the situation they were in? Can you tell us about one?

Poor old Jennifer Gates, my heroine. I threw a lot of stuff at her that makes me cringe. I felt awful for her when I made her peer in the bunker on the 12th at Sea Breeze Golf Course to kickstart the book; I feel awful for her every time I make her wear a pair of tight jeans (for very different reasons). And when I make her chug down a bottle of champagne and watch cricket, that gets pretty nasty too.

Do you have a favourite moment from the novel? Can you tell us about it without giving away any spoilers?

I love the scene in the golf shop where Jenn first picks up a golf club (she hasn’t played in about two years). I love it because her hero knows that this (playing golf again) is what she needs, better than Jenn knows herself.

Can you sum up the themes or feeling of “Fairway to Heaven” in four words?

Golfer girl regains mojo.

Love it! Thanks for coming by Lily and telling us about “Fairway to Heaven”.

I hope Lily had fun with us and I hope you’ve enjoyed getting to know more about Lily and her work. I’ve read some snippets of “Fairway to Heaven” posted on her blog, if you’d like to know more, head on ever and check them out!

To find out more about what makes Lily tick, visit her blog: and check the About pages.
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Author Interview with Lily Malone – breaking into the market, self-publishing and more!

Happy New Year everyone! Welcome to 2014! What a better way to start the year than with Wordleberry’s very first author interview!

Today I welcome Lily Malone, Australian Contemporary Romance author of “His Brand of Beautiful” (Escape Publishing) and “The Goodbye Ride” (Self-published) to Wordleberry.Goodbye_Ride

I love Lily’s way with words. I thoroughly enjoyed both her current works, and with her newest novel “Fairway to Heaven” releasing on the 8th of January (squeeeee!) I asked her if I could interview her, to which she accepted, yay for us! I put a lot of thought into composing my questions; this is my first author interview. In the end I asked Lily exactly what I, the aspiring author, wanted to know. Not realising how many questions I asked, then loving the huge reply from Lily, it was decided to put the interview into two parts. Today we talk about breaking into the market, self-publishing versus traditional publishing and Lily’s process. In two days on the third of January I will post the second half – everything you want to know (well everything I wanted to know haha) about “Fairway to Heaven”.

Welcome Lily!

Hi Ali – thanks for having me – it’s a pleasure to visit your blog. (Your blog is vey pretty, might I say!) 
(Thanks Lily!!)

Breaking into the market.
“His Brand Of Beautiful” was your debut novel and was published in March 2013 by Escape Publishing. When you were first searching for a home for this novel, how many agents/publishers did you submit to before finding Escape?

Oh – how long have you got Ali? Answering this question is tricky, because I submitted His Brand Of Beautiful to many agents and publishers over 12 months, and it was rejected. It was rejected for good reason. The book wasn’t ready. I had so much to learn. What helped me was feedback from entering RWA contests (such as the STALI – Single Title And Loving It); and critique partner feedback. Also – time was what I needed. Time getting words on a page. Time spent re-reading, deleting, reading craft posts, learning. It was invaluable to me.

In April of 2012, a scene from HBOB made the finals in the RWA’s First Kiss competition and that was an indication to me I was getting on the right track with the story. Then late in 2012 I realised that even after working on it for such a long time, I still had the start all wrong. I started it in completely the wrong place. When I fixed this for the final time and submitted it again to those who’d yet to see it – that’s when I started getting the good feedback. For example, requests for the Full for the first time, and then that glorious Saturday when I got ‘The Call’ – or actually it was ‘The Email’. In that weekend I had offers of publication from Crimson Romance, and Escape, and I went with Escape because Kate Cuthbert is lovely, and I thought given it was an Australian story, I’d like to be with an Australian publisher.
After I signed the contract with Escape, I had two further requests for Fulls on HBOB, from Wild Rose Press & Entangled. But it was all a done deal by then.

At what point did you decide to move away from traditional print publishing and the search for an agent, directing instead towards e-publishing (with brands such as Escape) and self-publishing?

It wasn’t a conscious decision. Honestly, if a print publisher had picked up HBOB, I would have leapt at the chance, just as I leapt toward Escape. In regards an Agent – that was just SO HARD. I felt like I couldn’t get any kind of foot in the door. Again part of this was the book wasn’t ready when I began submitting it. By the time the book *was* ready, I think I’d exhausted my list of agents.
So that might be a word of warning – when you think you’re ready to submit the book – you really are probably not. Make sure you’ve had other sets of eyes reading it (not your friends)… take on board the feedback you get, revise, revise, revise (leave it at least a month and then read it again) and then start submitting.
Now – I’m not worried about agents anymore. One day it might happen. For now what’s important is getting more work out there, more titles under my belt and learning, learning, learning.

Would you do anything differently if you had to do it again?
(See my answer above).
Patience isn’t my virtue. I get terribly impatient toward the end of the writing process. I want to hit send. I want to hit publish. I have to really train myself hard to make sure I send the book to CPs and then Beta readers and finalise, finalise, finalise.

Self Publishing.
After the release of “His Brand of Beautiful” with Escape Publishing, what led you to self-publish your novella “The Goodbye Ride” so soon after, and why did you choose to self-publish?

The Goodbye Ride is a novella set in Hahndorf (tourist mecca town in South Australia in the Adelaide Hills – it’s a glorious little town) and it is set over the Queen’s Birthday Long Weekend which in SA, falls in June.
So I had the novella finished by April 2013, and I did submit it to Escape, but in the time between me submitting it, and hearing back, I’d continued to work on it. (See – I’d been impatient again – I submitted the book to Escape before I’d even had CP feedback). Somewhere along this line, I discovered Marion Archer of Making Manuscripts, and she offered to Beta read The Goodbye Ride for me. With Marion’s feedback, and then with my CP feedback, I ended up adding almost another 12,000 words to The Goodbye Ride and it became a far better story. Unfortunately Escape never saw the book again from this point, because time was marching on, and as I mentioned, I wanted to have it available by the Queen’s Birthday weekend.
I am an editor by trade. I felt that I had a clean manuscript without errors, and with the changes suggested through my round of Beta reader/CP feedback, I could get it ready to go. I also knew a certain graphic designer [Bright Eyed Owl] who could make a cover for me. And I felt confident in working through the self-publishing process on Amazon. So I felt there was nothing to lose and everything to gain, in me getting a second Lily Malone book out within those few months (March 2013 for HBOB, late May for TGR).

“Fairway to Heaven” is being self-published. What lead you to making that choice? 

My dreadful impatience! Fairway is set on the beautiful beach at Geographe Bay in Western Australia and it’s a summer story. I really love the concept of ‘Reading in Real Time’. I feel the book is ready to go and I just don’t want to put myself on that rollercoaster of waiting for a publisher to get back to me. Possibly because I’ve been through it with The Goodbye Ride, I feel more confident about making this decision this time. I value my relationship with Marion Archer, and with Bright Eyed Owl who has done me another wonderful cover, and I’ve been lucky to have critique partners/Beta Readers in Kylie Kaden, Jennie Jones and Juanita Kees, who have all read the book and given me brilliant feedback.

As a self-publishing Author, what can you not live without?

Beta readers who give honest feedback!

When do you know a piece of work is ready for the real world? Do you have a set of steps to follow or do you go with your gut?

At the end of the day it’s a gut call. I’m not too proud over the words I’ve written to not be able to take feedback – as a journalist and editor – I cut my stuff all the time. But I have had to train myself to realise this publishing caper isn’t an individual thing. Outside eyes are invaluable. My CPs are not just professional contacts, they are reading and writing friends that I trust implicitly.
But even with their suggestions and comments, at the end of the day it is my gut call about what to revise, what to rework. It is my story and I’m the one who knows what these characters would and wouldn’t do. Any author would say the same!

There are a lot of novice writers like myself out there, on the cusp of the publishing world. We are at the stage of deciding whether to follow traditional or self-publishing. What is your advice to us?

I would say go the traditional route first. There is nothing like the sense of validation when a publisher tells you they want your work. Kate Cuthbert’s call at Escape – and the other editors who expressed interest in my book – they help me understand my writing has a market. This has made me more confident about all my subsequent decisions.

To be successful with self-publishing, being able to market and advertise yourself, and develop your readership is key. What social media tool do you find the most effective for attracting new readers?

Oh – I don’t know an answer to this one and I bounce this around with so many writing friends. I think above everything else, the key thing is to write the next book. Don’t get so stuck on social media trying to promote the book you’ve just published, that you forget to write the next book. I’m pretty sure most people agree that the more (good quality) stories you have in the market, the more chance of someone stumbling across you… or looking you up if they come across a book they like. So when it’s written, promote it as best you can, send your baby out into the world, soak it up for a while… and get back to the next book!

The process. 
What is your favourite part of the whole process?

Editing, I think. I always picture editing as kind of like going for a haircut. At first, the hairdresser (editor) can cut huge chunks out and let them fall to the floor, after she’s cut off those big chunks, she starts shaping and refining and the cuts get smaller and more intricate and layered. (Layering is a key word – I enjoy that part of the process which is a ‘craft’ part).

Wow! We’ve got this far and I haven’t even asked Lily about her new release, “Fairway To Heaven” yet… so let’s save that for next time.

To find out more about what makes Lily tick, visit her blog: and check the About pages.
Lily is on Facebook:
And Twitter:


Australian Contemporary Romance
His Brand Of Beautiful and The Goodbye Ride
Both on Amazon now!

See you all in two days for Part 2 of my interview with the Lovely Lily Malone!